HARMONY IS LOVE

A new style, I guess I got to mess up few times before I get it!

Hear the tear dropping out of my eye

As my blood tells my heart another lie

Rocks and walls surround my mind

Make my eyes go blind

Over that all you stood

Narrating my story to the croud

You said it clear you said it loud



If you love me you shall bleed

Slowly and painfully for earth you'll feed



Love is harsh and I shall know

O' my heart won't you just blow?

Variety of choices love offer, but

Eventually you'll have to suffer

Author's Note

I know this is not the kind of harmony any one would like for but it's a harmony, not good not peacefull, but still LOVE IS HARMONY and HARMONY IS LOVE !

Reviews

[Ria Benthil]

Acronyms are challenging to wield into creativity, but the unique perspective on love succeeded that challenge. The rhyme scheme gave the soft spoken atmosphere, but it still contributes to the message. To my relief, the speaker matured the writing style with the content. Instead of perceiving love as flawless, the writer recognized realistic elements of affection. The most appealing factor about the poem is how the writer has configured an otherwise common phrase into something authentic.

[Short.Nerd]

Great job!

[Geralyn Miller]

Real love is not harsh, except when we abuse and betray love. Real love is a warm fire in the heart that remains even when the body of the person you loved is dead and buried and their soul is with God. Real love is eternal. One day you will know.

[SusanB]

Nice, thanks for sharing

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

nice write...interesting...and oddly i find it vague...in a really really good way..its great..keep it up :D

[Shelly Braen]

Acronyms!!! ^_^ I love, love, love it! It is deep, heart and soul pleasing! Wonderful job!

[Saki!]

Cool. I like how you did this. It's sad and I'm sorry, but its totally wizard.

[Heather D]

this is an interesting and original way to write a poem! i loved this! great write, very creative!

[youngwriter222]

Lovely use of Acronyms! This type of writing is always difficult but you did a wonderful job putting Harmony and Love together in a Acronym!

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. oh, this is so amazingly special ... love is indeed very challenging ... at least it constantly keeps me on my toes ... and yet it's all about harmony ... even the struggle ... despite the pain and hardship ... is sweet ... it's a lovable song ... that's lovingly written ... just like your poem ... beautifully written ... earnest and expressive ...

[chyenne]

100 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!