Unbelievable You

For a love of such worth,
I give my hand to you,
to enjoy our lives together,
each morning made of blue

I reach out to kiss you,
when your skies are grey,
To bring your soul back to heaven,
in such a loving way

My world isn't the same,
when I'm not able to show,
my love personally to you,
without you I cannot grow

your love is like food to me,
the kind I need to breathe,
without it I am but a shell,
life yes but an empty Sheath

When once again I can hold you,
My life can flow again,
then I can give you all my love,
I anxiously await for then

If this was an experiment my love,
then consider it as success,
For true I cannot live without your love,
You truly are my BEST!

Reviews

[lokisdad]

Very beautifully written it has a way of flowing. It rhymed but now in a child like way. It made me envision a very old couple who shared many years together and seeing their thoughts played out like a movie on a screen for me. I love to read and have the words come to life before my eyes.

[Nisreen]

I wish my man says that to me

lol

Totally love
and heartfelt

[Osiris]

Thank you so much for commenting :) Nothing but love when I wrote it...