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Describing someone you love when they stop showing emotion and become seemingly lifeless

Hello my darling,

Please start smiling,

You never are alone

Hello my dear,

Please shed a tear,

Or are you made of stone?

Hello my love,

Sent from above,

Why have you gone so cold?

Bereft of emotion,

I've gotten the notion,

That you are mine no more.

Reviews

[Angel Criner]

Ouch. This is too real... I feel like this is how my ex viewed me after I went through my cold hearted phase. One of my fears is having to watch someone I care about break like this.
*Claps*
Well done with a limited amount of words and overwhelming emotion.

[Average person]

I fear the same though I've done it before myself. And thank you much:)

[Angel Criner]

Trying to hide away and protect ourselves...
We tend to only hurt us even more in the long run as well as the ones who do care.
But no problem... have a good night, lol.