Saved From Herself

Saved From Herself

A Poem by Average person

At school her life seemed perfect
High grades and a group of friends
She laughed at the silly nonsense
Her happiness seemed to never end
She never asked for anything
And always gave her best
But sometimes she sat and wondered
Why cant I be like the rest?
The other girls were all so pretty
And they never felt alone
Deep inside she envied them
But this could never show
She thought she never be good enough
But she knew she had to try
In the end she only hurt
All she did was cry
Although she never asked for much
She needed something she couldn't deny
Someone to save her from herself
Without that, she could've died

© 2014 Average person


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Average person
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It's unfortunate that many are led to feel as this when they have so very much to offer!! We all have positive attributes to offer to others, and it is their loss when they do not see the worth of a friend.
It is better to be "yourself" and not try to conform to the opinions of others!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Deep inside she envied them

But this could never show

"She thought she never be good enough

But she knew she had to try

In the end she only hurt

All she did was cry"

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)...................

Posted 11 Years Ago


Pretty powerful, even from my perspective I know what that feels like, I like this

Posted 11 Years Ago


Average person

11 Years Ago

Thanks. It's sad to think how many people feel this way and you never know it..:/

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Added on January 4, 2014
Last Updated on January 4, 2014
Tags: alone, misunderstood, loneliness, longing, secret, envy

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Hi. I'm a girl, by the way, just saying because for some reason people tend to think I'm a guy. lol Anyways just doing what I do, writing and what not. My writing isn't deep so don't expect it to be. .. more..

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A Poem by Average person