For Once and Forever

I wrote this to dedicate to the eternal bliss for those who're in love, and deserve an eternal love back from their beloved...

From Always in a while
Till it turns to never,
I wish to see you smile
For once, and forever.

Nothing else in my eyes
But tears of endeavour,
With a promise to rise,
Sun sets, in forever...

That cannot be lost
Which was never earned,
Oft that is the cost
Of love, unreturned.

Will oft so mellifluous
Be silence whenever,
If some love could bind us
For once, and forever...

Author's Note

It may contain grammatical or other mistakes, so I would appreciate every suggestion from the reader's side, and you can also tell me what is your opinion about the poem, take care... and have a nice eve ahead

Reviews

[Cagan]

I like the rhyming scheme a lot! It sounds very beautiful, though perhaps the theme is a bit simple or cliche. One question, is there a reason for the capitalization of "Always" in the first line? Perhaps it is a mistake? Beautiful poem though, and welcome to the site!

[Miranda Lynn]

I like this. I really like this.