Unspoken and Undecided

Not quite sure. The title is how it is... how and last line. The "Siren" thing is the mythical being from the Epic told by homer= The Odyssey not as in like police cars XD

There are words that never pass our lips

Undecided thoughts, that flood our minds

Words that are unspoken like sunken ships

Hiding the thoughts behind a window covered by blinds.

 

Whisper those unspoken words before they wither away

Don't let the petals of your undecided thoughts turn into a faded memory

The flower of speech moves to the winds thoughts, swish and sway

The bees ready with the pollon words and thought like a delivory.

 

You speak, you think, you wait and see

Too long ago was this supposed to happen

you've been too much, yet not enough, all the lies you told to me

too many unspoken words and undecided, like a deadly song sung by a Siren.

Author's Note

i know it probly sux but lol idk

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

I enjoyed your descriptive writing Containing some simple truths
But you did not spell check before posting which detracts from your message.
You have a talent for rhyming but pay no attention to meter which makes it lack smoothess of flow when read aloud ivor aka poeticpiers