Another- "He Said, She Said"

It's a cute little love poem. I wrote it randomly :P

He said “I know”
She said “You never loved”
He said “I’ve always cared”
She said “Everything was a mistake”
He said “It’s a risk everyone has to take”
She said “I love you too much”
He said “There’s nothing of the such”
She said “We’re only teens”
He said “That’s only what it seems”
She said “Death will do us part”
He said “Our love is only the start”
She said “Hold me”
He said “Maybe”
She said “You’re my shining star”
He said “I’ll only fly so far”
She said “I love you”
He said “Not until we say I do”
She said “Right now”
He said “First take a bow”
She said “I’m scared”
He said “It’s something we’ve always shared”
She said “You have the key to my heart”
He said “Our love is off the chart”
She said ‘No one approves”
He said “We’ve got nothing to lose”
She said “What if I mess things up”
He said “I’ll catch our love in a magic cup”
She said “you mean the world to me”
He said “ With you is where I love to be”
She smiled and pulled him close, ready to kiss
He smiled and kissed her cheek. “Don’t do something you’ll regret. Don’t feel the need to rush, this is a love I’d rather neither of us were stupid enough to risk”

Author's Note

:D your opinion would be nice ^_^

Reviews

[topsyturvy]

simple and sweet, i like how the guy isn't into rushing things, most guys these days tend to rush things even though they know both y'all ain't ready.. i like the simplicity of this poem and how it manages to capture the one reading it and making a person gush..:)

[topsyturvy]

simple and sweet, i like how the guy isn't into rushing things, most guys these days tend to rush things even though they know both y'all ain't ready.. i like the simplicity of this poem and how it manages to capture the one reading it and making a person gush..:)

[Flo]

good as always :D, that cheered me up a bit :3 nice work