Sweet Nectar

Sweet nectar of thee
Warm kisses, tight hugs, firm hands
Envelop my heart

Reviews

[Ballpark Frank]

ah! So brief, so sweet. Love it

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh Dear Poetess 🥀
I love when a woman releases her sensual passions to dance free and sing to our hearts and desires upon her page, and what better than in the brevity of an exotically delicious Japanese Senryu? ; )

Wonderfully done and warmly shared, Lady Orchid … thank you ever-so sweetly! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Sleepygirl]

This is really great sweet poem. i love it.

[Relic]

~ A worthy poem to express the happiness and pleasure within your heart. Love is a drug we can never get enough of. ~

[Orchid]

Thank you, Relic. Indeed - love, lust, desires... they all conspire against us :)

[Relic]

Temptation is certainly a fruit with a delectable and undeniable taste. That's for sure. :)

[Orchid]

Yes it is - sometimes the aftertaste has quite a bite to it, too :)

[Relic]

True, very true. :)

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a gorgeous senryu...and it is, such sweet, sweet nectar...this is untra-romantic!!

[Orchid]

*blushes* Thank you, FT :)

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My pleasure, Orchid

[Moonie]

Very sweet and enchanting, Orchid! Bravo! :))

[Orchid]

Thank you :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love the brevity of haiku's and senryu's...and more and more poets are writing them now! Nice to meet you, Orchid!

[Orchid]

Thank you again, Kelly :) I'll come by and read you soon (early here - off to work for now)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Beautiful senryu! Expresses love with each word :)

[Orchid]

Thank you for stopping over and leaving a review. :) I wanted to write something short and fun, but a hint of sensuousness.

[Turtle :)]

This! This is powerful and beauteous! Such emotion wrapped into three simple phrases and words. Beautiful simplicity! Bravo Orchid! Beauteously written :)
- Turtle :)

[Orchid]

Thank you, Turtle :)

[willweb]

This was absolutely beautiful Orchid. So much desire in your words. I really enjoyed this today.

[Orchid]

Thank you, Will :)