We're Not Here Anymore

Well it was quite.

The winds blew.

The curtians fluttered.

It made it all seem dramatic.

I could look around.

I would feel empty.

But I'm not there.

And neither are you.

I could look around.

And wonder how it all came to be.

How it all went wrong.

And we lost what we lost.

But I'm not here anymore.

And neither are you.

Reviews

[Rana]

Great choice of words which makes the poem so brief and simple yet quite striking, speaking of the phase when one yet has to move on and when one ponders and reflects on days that've passed. A nice little poem.

[Sophia]

Why thank you. :)