Asylum

Demented voices echo in my head

Bouncing off the hallways built within my skull

My little padded room hold in my screams

Let the walls close in, pure and laced in white

Be my peace in the insanity

Let my bones crack, mold me

Chill my blood, consistent and cold

Be my sedative and numb it all

I surrender, gazing at the flickering lights

Smiling through a blurred image

I look to you and think I got one thing right

Author's Note

Tell me what you think, just a rough draft :)

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

Twisted and bizzare. Right up my alley. Well written.

[Bluefire]

This. Is. Awesome!
I love how you put this in so few words.
Very cleverly played!

[A. Amos]

'Just the mild doses...ending was essence of your whole read...

[OrangeSlice]

Is that good or bad? ?

[A. Amos]

Freaking good:)

[OrangeSlice]

Ok whew I couldn't tell if you liked it or not