The Secret Admirer

It all started with a letter,

Heart hidden within.

The subtle hint of love,

Flowing from my pen.

He smiled and winked,

His soft hand's touch.

He holds me close,

Never too much.

The next day came,

It just wasn't right.

Never a word,

But always in sight.

My head is spinning,

Don’t understand.

"What’s going on?"

My only demand.

It all started with a letter,

Thus it ends the same.

My hidden love finally spells,

My always hidden name.

 

Reviews

[MorganBlair]

love it!

[Livenrite]

Amazing! Such an awesome flow!! Thanks for sharing:)

[OceanTropic]

I LOVED this. LOVED it.

"My hidden love finally spells my always hidden name." That's so sad, but I really felt the emotional impact it had on the reader. Great work.

[Martina]

That was really good

[ATG]

I really liked this poem. It was well written and very interesting.

[Greystone]

I admire the overall flow and the rhyme scheme-- Plus, I'm a girl:

I've been there. ;p

[Wildecat]

This is a fantastic poem, well written and goes into my favorites.

[Dianna Reneé]

Whoa, girl. That is simply amazing. Lovely job. The rhyming and rhythm was awesome!

[Gypsy_Moon]

Now this is so sad, made me want to cry....so very well penned. Felt the emotions written with your words. Talent of a true poet when you write from your heart. Gypys_Moon