The Secret Admirer

The Secret Admirer

A Poem by Orahemae December

It all started with a letter,

Heart hidden within.

The subtle hint of love,

Flowing from my pen.

He smiled and winked,

His soft hand's touch.

He holds me close,

Never too much.

The next day came,

It just wasn't right.

Never a word,

But always in sight.

My head is spinning,

Don’t understand.

"What’s going on?"

My only demand.

It all started with a letter,

Thus it ends the same.

My hidden love finally spells,

My always hidden name.

 

© 2009 Orahemae December


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love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Amazing! Such an awesome flow!! Thanks for sharing:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I LOVED this. LOVED it.

"My hidden love finally spells my always hidden name." That's so sad, but I really felt the emotional impact it had on the reader. Great work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


That was really good

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I really liked this poem. It was well written and very interesting.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I admire the overall flow and the rhyme scheme-- Plus, I'm a girl:

I've been there. ;p

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a fantastic poem, well written and goes into my favorites.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Whoa, girl. That is simply amazing. Lovely job. The rhyming and rhythm was awesome!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Now this is so sad, made me want to cry....so very well penned. Felt the emotions written with your words. Talent of a true poet when you write from your heart. Gypys_Moon

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Orahemae December
Orahemae December

Adamsville, TN



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