I Miss Him

I miss him in the daytime,

I miss him in the night.

I miss him when I see him,

I miss him out of sight.

 

I see him when I’m sleeping,

I see him when I wake.

I see him while at school,

I see him in my break.

 

I dream of us together,

I dream of us apart.

 I dream of us and what we had,

 I dream of us and my part.

 

I cry when I see him

I cry when I don’t.

I cry when I’m at home,

I cry so he won’t.

 

I still miss him in the daytime,

I still miss him in the night.

I still miss him when I see him,

I still miss him out of sight.

Reviews

[Vampire]

Yet again another great poem, again i know how that feels, i'm still in that state now....anyway i thought it was a really good poem that flows beautifully and sends out a message that im sure every girl on this site can relate to. :)

[anneliese]

i like this, simple and gets the point across. good job!

[Brianna Brie]

Wow...this sums up my last few years of life. Great poetry! Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.