hallucination

hallucination

A Poem by Ophelia
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hm. i don't know. :P heeeeee haha It's just a crazy poem. Thanks for reading! :D

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Amongst a gaunt field, I found verdure

I was entranced by its enticement.

It furnished me with nectarous unripe fruits

Its brimmed latex dried under the sun.

Dried brown powder with bitterness gave me a wry face.

After a while, it gave me carte blanche.

The gaunt field turned into amenity,

My exhaustion turned into tranquility,

Anxiety went away,

My illusion and dream became reality.

What is dream and what is reverie?

© 2010 Ophelia


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Ahh what a feeling!! I remember it well. Great job with the use of specific words. You chose them perfectly. Thank you for sharing! 100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, I love your vocabulary. You used some rich words in this, I actually learned a couple new ones. And, of course, this made the description rich as well. Very good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is a good poem because i enjoy smoking the buds of the cannabis plant

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 11, 2010
Last Updated on April 14, 2010
Tags: marijuana, hallucinaion, tranquility

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:D AHHHHHHHHH yay! English is my second language. Excuse my grammatical mistakes. :) more..


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