Close My Eyes

Things will never be the same

Not really sure why I came here
Satan's beating me with each tear
Sometimes I just want to go away
Sometimes I don't belong anyway
Everyone forgets about me
They kicked me and charged the fee
What am I doing here tonight
Nothing ever feels right
I've lost myself a long time ago
I just continued to let it flow
College is just another ride
Almost just as bad as suicide
No one seems to understand
No one gets why I belong with a band
But I do..I really do need purpose
I feel like a one man show in the circus
Can you understand what I am saying?
Is there really a point in praying?
Does God even hear what I say?
Does he want me to go or stay?
I've lost my friend a long time ago
Now it's starting to show
Close my eyes and wish this all away
Things will never be okay

Reviews

[Tai-San]

this is sad. im here for you, you know.

[Starting Over]

Such a sad but very great poem! You have an art for writting Mr. Itchy

[unspokenguilt]

So sad but none-the-less a Great write! Very strong and Emotional...i loved it!
:) elyssa

[just is]

Let me try this again, beautiful write, i didn't get through the first time my machine shut off.

[just is]

Can you understand what I am saying?
Is there really a point in praying?
Does God even hear what I say?
Does he want me to go or stay?
I've lost my friend a long time ago
Now it's starting to show
Close my eyes and wish this all away
Things will never be okay

Such Powerful words and so emotional, very well written.

[~Qu33n B~]

this is so sadd...=( well written and good rhyme scheme.

~Qu33n B Cullen~

[Kiara]

the emotion and sadness flow perfectly throughout this piece...............sadly written but incredibly told : ) amazing write!