She Smiles

She Smiles

A Poem by Endless Rain
"

Oh baby please don't go!

"

 

Oh she has a million smiles
We are only separated by miles
Her perfume that sings love to me
Oh I hope she only sees me
The way she moves between the sheets
I love her with every beat my heart beats
She has red and yellow flowers in her hair
She loves to sing the good Lord's prayer
If only I could get her attention
Not sure if I would be an honorable mention
She's the love I've never had as a lad
Tell me to shut up and don't be sad
The sweet tunes of Led Zeppelin lead me to her
The sweet cold rain caresses me with thunder
She is a melody I can listen to forever
And I know I might sound clever in this rhyme
But baby in my dreams I like to slap you on the behind
If only I could get myself to your heart
Your love is like a drug in a poison dart


As I slip between consciousness I see her there
Resting next to me in her pink underwear
Slowly kissing me on the neck here and there
I never want to leave this sweet memory
Forever in each others grasp and sweet kisses
Oh she tells me of the love that she misses
The memory starts to fade to black and I'm running
Towards the end of the light in the tunnel, yelling..
"No!! my love don't leave me!!"
I wake up to find no one by my side
Oh! the tears that I cried!
I felt like my heart and soul died
Forever alone, stuck without my bride

 

© 2008 Endless Rain


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I love the line 'She is a melody I can listen to forever'. Its a very good poem that expresses emotion and paints a beautiful picture. Great Job!!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


The sweet tunes of Led Zeppelin lead me to her
The sweet cold rain caresses me with thunder
She is a melody I can listen to forever
And I know I might sound clever in this rhyme
But baby in my dreams I like to slap you on the behind
If only I could get myself to your heart
Your love is like a drug in a poison dart


Loved these lines, this is so wonderful, I like this, very well written.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love this writing. It's so sad for the protagonist yet captivating for the reader. Thanks a bunch for posting!

~Qu33n B Cullen~

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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