Twisted Love

Baby's got a pretty picture
I could really love her
Baby's got a new disease
I could be the knight she needs
Baby's got twisted love on her arm
I could be that lucky charm
Baby's gonna twist with me at night

I could be Mr right tonight
Your twisted tattoo is in my mind
I could be the love you're trying to find
Your twisted love makes me burn
I don't think I will ever learn

Baby's gonna paint me a picture
I could be the one to fix her
Baby's telling me to leave
I can not seem to breathe
Baby's telling me I'm evil
I could just take this pill
Baby's saying I'm not Mr right
I think I gave her a fright
Baby's got love she doesn't need
I am starting to bleed

I could be what you want me to be
Or I could be a faint memory
I could hold you every night
Or I could die tonight
I could tell you that I love you
Or you could hate me too
Baby's got love she doesn't need
I am starting to bleed
Baby's telling me that I'm the disease

Reviews

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

Smiply wow... that was great! Loved it!

Peace

[Angel Baby]

Simply put..this is a great write. Enjoyed very much. Found it a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. P.W.

[bluessadmood]

that was a nice dialogue ..though you are speaking for both..
i could be anything you want ..name it
but she does not seem certain what she wants
just loved this..

[just is]

Oh! Wow! You're a son of a gun, This is so awesome, Simply amazing

I could be what you want me to be
Or I could be a faint memory
I could hold you every night
Or I could die tonight
I could tell you that I love you
Or you could hate me too
Baby's got love she doesn't need
I am starting to bleed
Baby's telling me that I'm the disease

I so loved these lines irght here, The whole write is si amazing I could even put a tune to this.