DENIED

Ein Lied

EVERY time I have to try
EVERY time I say goodbye..
So many times where I've lied
So many times I drift with the tide

Will you be the one by my side?
"NEVER! you are denied"

Will you love me today
"NEVER! just go away!"

Will you love me anyway?
"NEVER! I hope you die today"

So much hate pulsing through her veins
The blood stings while it rains

So much hate it's killing me every day
My skin boils every single day

EVERY time I have to try
EVERY time I say goodbye..
So many times where I've lied
So many times I drift with the tide

Tell me you love me
Tell me you want me
"NEVER! YOU ARE DENIED"

Reviews

[sherie carter]

Will you be the one by my side?
"NEVER! you are denied"

Will you love me today
"NEVER! just go away!"

I like how this poem plays out two opposite emotions so strongly. The speaker seems sad and longs for something more, while the other person is angry and unforgiving; I love it!

[just is]

EVERY time I have to try
EVERY time I say goodbye..
So many times where I've lied
So many times I drift with the tide

Tell me you love me
Tell me you want me
"NEVER! YOU ARE DENIED"

Love these lines here, this is a a very well said write.

[John A Common]

Very powerfull poem. Its angry yet full of sorrow,great job.