Let It Go

Free stylin like it's illegal
Free flyin like an eagle
Too much I have to say
Do you care anyway?
Number 1 on the charts
You're number one for crushing hearts
Do you care anyway?
Look I can rap all day long
Look I can hate you in this song
But I've let go of all this hate
Getting rid of the heartache it can create
Do you care anyway?
Blow me off like a sawed off shotgun
I'm telling you that I am done
In the end I don't deserve this treatment
Do you care anyway?
Like a finger print engraved in cement
It's permanently done
 

Reviews

[Indigoshadows]

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[just is]

Free stylin like it's illegal
Free flyin like an eagle
Too much I have to say
Do you care anyway?
Number 1 on the charts
You're number one for crushing hearts

These lines are just amazing, like this write alot.

[leaving]

very beautiful

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

I really like the strong emotion, the rhythm and the way each line delivered a powerful blow.
The imagery was great and the message was very thought-provoking.

Excellent write!

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

"You're number one for crushing hearts
Look I can hate you in this song
But I've let go of all this hate
Getting rid of the heartache it can create"

were my favorite lines in this poem and i loved this poem and it speaks to me! I love dit a lot!! Great job!

[darkgurl]

I like this very well written and well expressed with emotion

Look I can rap all day long
Look I can hate you in this song
But I've let go of all this hate
Getting rid of the heartache it can create
Do you care anyway?

Love these lines.....KIm

[J.Black]

Whoa, love this piece! Filled with emotion, anger and such hate!

"Do you care anyway?
Number 1 on the charts
You're number one for crushing hearts
Do you care anyway?"

[BUTTers]

I liked it!
especially the last two lines
zA~

[He@ther!]

awesome!!:) the writing is clever and I'd love to hear it with a beat:)

-Sincerely,
Heather:)

[.]

I loved it
awesome

i love these lines:
"Number 1 on the charts
You're number one for crushing hearts"

and

"Blow me off like a sawed off shotgun
I'm telling you that I am done"