TORMENT

Take me down into hell.
Lock my pain in a cell.
Increasing the pain
From this burning flame.
That scorches me to the core.
Leaving me wanting more.
I am tired of your lies.
You think you are so wise.
Burn in hell and tell me
How it feels to be a lost memory.
Where no one remembers your name.
Your misery will put you to shame.
Your ashes will burn into the sky.
No one will be able to hear you cry.
Let the flames bury you as you die.

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I am tired of your lies.
You think you are so wise.
Burn in hell and tell me
How it feels to be a lost memory.
Where no one remembers your name.
Your misery will put you to shame.
Your ashes will burn into the sky.
No one will be able to hear you cry.
Let the flames bury you as you die.

Love this write here, this is amazing. So emotional and very poetic.

[DiamondNRough AKA Patty..]

Interesting poem...I am just confused...It starts out as if it is a first person poem then it sounds as if it diverts to someone else.