Forever

Written during a time of loss. A very difficult thing for me to write, so I hope you enjoy it.

You said we were meant to be,

That never before you'd felt this way,

That you'd stay with me forever.

 

I loved you like no other could,

Like you said no one else has tried.

I said I'd be there forever.

 

I remember you holding me

And speaking those words in my ear.

"You know I'll love you forever."

 

Never before had I considered

That you would be the one to break my heart.

Or leave me alone forever.

 

Like a haunting song it comes,

Drowning out thoughts and other emotions,

Leaving me to miss you forever.

 

Your voice and your words

They fill my mind and kill me slowly.

Is this what you had in mind...

 

When you told me forever?

Reviews

[Masq]

Beautiful piece! Perfect flow & form. I really like the way you rounded this poem out and the last line sealed it as a quality piece of poetry! Great write, I enjoyed this very much.

[Wildecat]

Exceptional penning, I really liked this poem, well done.

[Melon Choly]

OMG I could have written this myself....perfect, absolutely perfect!

[turtlegirlluver]

I like the strong emotion in this piece, I can definitely relate to some of it. I like the change of emotions too, this poem speaks the truth. This was very good!