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A Poem by Ookpik
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N0mV1raPQ3o&ab_channel=AgnesObel

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And when she'd go, to fall asleep,
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Sheathing her shoulders under a comforter
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And slipping into the space beneath the duvet,
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When she'd wrap her eyes with fabric - stained color,
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Bleeding tyrian dye, vermillion, alizarin and ochre -
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She'd fall, 
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Instead of into slumber,
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Into the rapture of her dreams. 
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And she would see things
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That she had not yet
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Learned to know how to believe -
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Things that took shape, in shapelessness,
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In shadows, in umbra, 
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In patterns flattened 
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Into quaver.
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Cut from semibreve.
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And they would set to dancing, 
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Flashing,
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Dilating, vacillating, 
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Weaving in wicked mimicries
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Behind the space that occupied her eyelids -
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Phosphene burned into colorless alacrity -
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And anthropomorphizing automata
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In an evincement of shape's lucidity.
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(break)
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© 2021 Ookpik


Author's Note

Ookpik
(WIP)

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WOW, poetry like this is what I came here to find. Thank you for sharing. I loved this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ookpik

3 Years Ago

Oh, thank you - still half-finished with this one but I appreciate the kindness.

-Ook

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Ookpik
Ookpik

Yukon Territory, Canada



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