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A Poem by Ookpik
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kv1rYcepTEQ&list=RDKv1rYcepTEQ&start_radio=1

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If this is to be my corner
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Than allow me to claw at it.
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If this is to be my alley
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Permit me to rend fangs,
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Tight, into its impertinence.
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If this is fate
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Than I want to rip it.
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If this is to be my future,
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Than I want to carve into it;
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I want to maul it
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And leave its broken frame
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As a warning
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For those ignorant deities 
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With enough audacity
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To tell me what I am to be -
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To tell me what I should be -
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Or to laugh at me,
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Assuming quiet compliance
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Is no more than an exercise 
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In simple subservience. 
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© 2020 Ookpik


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It's not exactly the same, but something about this offering reminds me of Henley's "Invictus." There is the same defiant spirit held up to whatever gods may be, a kind of manifesto that says, I am what I am; deal with it. I will run my own life. This Promethean take your best shot attitude does not always end happily, but it is honest.

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Ookpik
Ookpik

Yukon Territory, Canada



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