Why is such a beauty so sad

with eyes hazle full of tears

tears of all her fears

she's what gives life to my soul

so why is such a beauty so sad

she's sad because she's lost

dosn't know where to turn

or who to choose when it comes to her partner

she loves us both but one of us must finish and be there in the end

and I know you won't last long

she will choose the one to be hers

but intill then my services are still to her

as she crys with every guilty feeling

I try my best to confort her

with every tear that rolls down her face I would be there to wipe them away

but nither of us is able to do that

but when and if the time comes that I should ever be by her side once again

you can bet I'm goona take care of her

for she's my angel here in hell

and I've been in the dark for far too long.

Reviews

[Sseoni]

Oo, what a great poem! I loved it! Once again, like most of your poems, it was full of emotion. It was very well written, wonderfully detailed, and greatly descriptive! I could just imagine what was going on in my head.(the scene and all)! It was such a fantastic poem! I really enjoyed reading it! :D