THE BEAST IS NOW UNLEASHED

The time has come and noone can stop what has already been set free it will prove the the world that happiness is only a fading ember in a dieing fire

I can feel it now as I fall to the floor

 

heart racing, blood rushing

 

Body breaking and nerves shaking

 

as a rush of pain and anger flood my system and I begin to yern

 

my views change and I grow fangs

 

claws rip and sences at the tip

 

I begin to hate all around me I'm looseing control

 

people try and save me from the inevitable

 

but will only face my true evil

 

as it slowly takes form the man I used to be is scorned

 

I can't escape can't replace with it I feel alive and strong

 

without it every thing goes wrong

 

it's a tough choise to eather accept or fight

 

especially at night

 

I simply want one thing it's not to much to ask

 

but it's complicated to last

 

it's been over a year since I've felt joy or happiness

 

all my attempts have been futile

 

but now all that's over I can't turn back it's taken hold

 

and that's simple fact

 

I can't fight anymore it will consume me

 

with nothing left to fight for

 

there is simply no more

 

so I go day by day

 

slipping back into darkness

 

as everyone say

 

your no fun, your mean, your cruel

 

in which I tell everyone your a fool,

 

I can't help what I am or what I've become

 

it may have been avoided if they cared some.

 

 

Author's Note

this is more of a poem than a story I'll admit but it has its meaning which you can plainly see but only if you understand me.

Reviews

[Ally Baker]

i do not know you so i do not really understand you. therefore i can not plainly see the meaning of this. but i read it and it was a very good write and gripping at me to finish reading it.

this would probably have to be my favorite part of the entire thing:
"as a rush of pain and anger flood my system and I begin to yern



my views change and I grow fangs



claws rip and sences at the tip



I begin to hate all around me I'm looseing control"

it was a very good write and i hope that the people who DO understand you and who CAN see the meaning of this write will read this and be there for you.

[With Each Raindrop Come..]

Yes, I can truely understand what's going on. If you need to talk, I'm gonna try to be constantly online after school. And if you ever need some help "calming down" then please, just message me.