Goodbye b***h, hello freedom

Goodbye b***h, hello freedom

A Poem by Caitlyn Murray

Today were bestfreinds

The next day all you want is to fight.

We make up.

Repeat.

 

Today was different.

You did your usual games

Try to fight over nothing.

But I stopped you.

 

I started this fight,

I'm the one who said enough of this s**t

Enough of your emotinal torture.

Was it mistake?

 

Should I have kept up your tricks?

To keep you as a friend?

I swore I would never trust you again.

But I know it wouldn't be the first time I lied to myself.

 

Now you act as if your the victim

As if it's all my fault.

But it's 50/50

You started it,

 

You changed.

I don't even know who you are anymore.

You want to be one of them

When we swore never ever to do that.

 

I could keep going

So you reliazed how much you hurt me.

But I won't waste my breath

Since you changed

All you care about is yourself

© 2011 Caitlyn Murray


Author's Note

Caitlyn Murray
Ignore grammar and spelling problems. I know it's a little long but what do you think? I had a fight with my only riend today and I wrote this.

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I can totally relate. :/

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm glad you liked the title :)


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I dont care if you laughed at it. It's just amazing that you enjoyed it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lmfao I don't know why but I found this funny. It was a really great poem though. I could relate a lot.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks everyone!!
To ShetryingtosaveherselfFirst: I love that idea for a title! I'm using it for sure!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow this is really good and maybe an idea for a title just my opinion I mean if I wrote this it would be Goodbye B***h Hello Freedom just an idea sorry about you and your friend hope things get betetr for you

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's good. I love the truth and emotion behind it :)
I don't find many poems I like these days, because they're all about love and s**t, but I really like this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the passion and the emotion. That is the best time to write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Okay well then its up to you, if you want to be her friend or not. It sounds like Paige to tell you the truth.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh god, let me explain. We were friends. She got a boyfriend. SHe got dumped. SHe changed into a person who only cared about herself. She started fighting with me and then today I had enough.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Caitlyn Murray
Caitlyn Murray

Oakville, Canada



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Hi! I'm caitlyn. I'm 17. I love writing but my true passion is reading but I can't make a job of that soo yeah. About me.. Hmm I talk too much. I have Social anixety and exophoria. Fun. I love Mario a.. more..

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