That place

This was writen when i was feeling Depressed and had feeling of alcholizum

To many thoughts in my head

Not enough feeling in my heart

My imagination is failing

My stories can not start
My world is fading.

 

 

Author's Note

This was edited and made Shorter becaues the last Stanza made no sense

Reviews

[T]

I could really identify with this. It's brevity is fine because it streamlines your main point, "To many thoughts in my head" This is a really good poem. Great work.

[Donna M. Burr]

I like the new piece (it was about time you posted something new :P). The meter is nice in the beginning, but seems to change a little at the ending. However, I can see the meaning behind the poem well, and I know what the last line is suppose to mean. :3