IN THE DARKNESS OF THE NIGHT

IN THE DARKNESS OF THE NIGHT

......

Overwhelm me with your love

Set my lips on fire

Hold me in the morning light

You're my hearts desire

Cradle me in loving arms

Whisper in my ear

Leave me never all alone

When the moon appears

Keep me ever unto thee

Like a gentle prayer

In the darkness of the night

Darling...I'll be there

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Reviews

[Brad Dehler]

"In the darkness of the night" started my assumption to be a poem of loss. But this is interesting, is it one of the poems that got published? Who published your poems? That is great. I like how positive this poem is, a bit vulnerable but with a strong element of hope.

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks so much Brad for your kind review! You are appreciated. ~Sharon

[John the Baptist]

Too many love poem go on and on. This one gets the message across powerfully but briefly. Other poets could learn from it.

[Miss Sharon]

Awww! What a nice thing to say. Thanks so much. ~Sharon

[Patricia]

This poem is like a prayer! The last line is perfect. Lovely!

[Miss Sharon]

What a beautiful review! Thanks ever so much. ~Sharon

[mou]

'...Keep me ever unto thee
Like a gentle prayer...'

Oh, I'm smitten by it.

Moonlight and your soft words have cradled the heart!
- mou

[Miss Sharon]

What a beautiful review! I appreciate you. ~Sharon

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful and very romantic.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you very much for your kind words. ~Sharon

[Betty Hermelee]

The best things happen in the "darkness of the night"A love tryst with two people who dearly commingle...respect and care for each other...no one wants to be alone when the moon peeks out...it's so romantic, one needs a lover to entwine, to cuddle under its beams....your words are lovely Sharon and I like the structure of the poem as well...NICE!
Warmly, B

[Miss Sharon]

You always make me feel like a "real writer." Thanks so much for your kindness! ~Sharon

[Betty Hermelee]

Dear Sharon: you ARE a real writer! and you're very welcome
Warmly, B

[Miss Sharon]

(((HUGS)))

[Betty Hermelee]

Hugs back at you!
Warmly, B

[Ken Simm.]

Elegant and erotic set in just the right language.

[Miss Sharon]

What a lovely review! thanks so much. ~Sharon

[Desert Knave]

A most beautiful romantic write. Nicely done. ~Jim

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks so much Jim! Always a pleasure to "see" you. ~Sharon

[Soren]

"Keep me ever unto thee
Like a gentle prayer"
I loved these two lines. A very romantic piece.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for your kind review! ~Sharon