I sense a bit of anxiety in this poem; one lover seems to expect troubles ahead, whether real or not; and wants to make sure her paramour understands that she needs comfort and kindness....no matter what should happen...we must concentrate on our love, our lust, our lives...let hold this minute in time while we frolic away our "spirits, sing and dance"......lovely Sharon.
Best, B
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2 Years Ago
Well bless your heart! Thanks so much for your beautiful and generous review my friend. I appreciate.. read moreWell bless your heart! Thanks so much for your beautiful and generous review my friend. I appreciate you. ~Sharon
I sense a bit of anxiety in this poem; one lover seems to expect troubles ahead, whether real or not; and wants to make sure her paramour understands that she needs comfort and kindness....no matter what should happen...we must concentrate on our love, our lust, our lives...let hold this minute in time while we frolic away our "spirits, sing and dance"......lovely Sharon.
Best, B
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Well bless your heart! Thanks so much for your beautiful and generous review my friend. I appreciate.. read moreWell bless your heart! Thanks so much for your beautiful and generous review my friend. I appreciate you. ~Sharon
dearest Sharon… as the Storms gather… we can be Safe in the Rock of Ages.. Cleft for Thee. gently, Pat
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2 Years Ago
So very true Pat! He has been my best friend since I was 8 years old. ~Sharon
2 Years Ago
Lovely … Sharon… In these troubled times, I lLove to listen to Elvis sing Gospel Songs… alth.. read moreLovely … Sharon… In these troubled times, I lLove to listen to Elvis sing Gospel Songs… although Elvis is gone, we can still be encouraged by his Faith. Be blessed. Pat
The poem like it's title rocks. It rocks in its rhythm as if you were being rocked to sleep in a loving mothers arms. It works so well with the theme of love and it just rocks as a poem.
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2 Years Ago
What a lovely review! Thanks ever so much. ~Sharon
Well, it is obvious, based on the rhythm and meter of your poem that you were a piano teacher or someone who had something to do with music because your poem has its own melody, and it is something that sings as you read it. Not to mention the theme is wonderful. Thanks so much for stopping by my poem because it made me come here and I am glad I did.
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2 Years Ago
Thanks so much kind sir for your very nice review! ~Sharon
I can see you have a good heart, Miss Sharon. The harmony of two hearts that are in tune with each other makes the best music. Great poem and rhymes here. :)
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2 Years Ago
Thank you my friend for your beautiful review of this write! ~Sharon
My name is Sharon, I am a retired piano teacher, I love the mountains where I hike and snowshoe, have had several poems published and love to write. I also love to read almost anything I can get my ha.. more..