I would certainly think so; after all she was like a new person at night with her black dress and gems and an new hairdo; I like the contrast in this poem, the vivid imagery and the rhyme, which you are so clever with Sharon; also you include the fact that she is pretty sexy and attractive, a transformation indeed, and reminds me of the wild west.
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Thanks so much my friend for your wonderful review of this one! ~Sharon
A couple weeks ago we went to Pawhuska, Oklahoma, home of The Pioneer Woman on Food Network. Your poem brought images of those good hard-working country folks who clean up so nicely.
Winston
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Such a kind review Winston. Thanks ever so much my friend! ~Sharon
I would certainly think so; after all she was like a new person at night with her black dress and gems and an new hairdo; I like the contrast in this poem, the vivid imagery and the rhyme, which you are so clever with Sharon; also you include the fact that she is pretty sexy and attractive, a transformation indeed, and reminds me of the wild west.
Best, B
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2 Years Ago
Thanks so much my friend for your wonderful review of this one! ~Sharon
This is a fun piece Sharon and shows that people are rarely one-dimensional. Your character certainly has two sides to her and I think I would like both. :0)
Thanks ever so much Les for your very nice review of this write...and for the compliment as well! Yo.. read moreThanks ever so much Les for your very nice review of this write...and for the compliment as well! You are appreciated. ~Sharon
dear Sharon… back in the Wild West days … women were Bar Maids… today Women wear Cowboy Boots to be Sexy and a ♦️ Diamond on their finger … but best of all we can sing along with Neil Diamond “Forever in Blue Jeans” never gets old. Your poem is a Keeper. Pat
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Thanks so much Pat for your beautiful review of this write. And YOU my dear are a keeper as well! ~S.. read moreThanks so much Pat for your beautiful review of this write. And YOU my dear are a keeper as well! ~Sharon
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dear Sharon… your Avatar reminds me of Gladiolas in Colors of 💗 Love… standing tall like a Li.. read moredear Sharon… your Avatar reminds me of Gladiolas in Colors of 💗 Love… standing tall like a Lighthouse to Guide us Home. I hear the Music of Seagulls in Symphonies of Harmony. Gently, Pat
This is a fun poem, but never underestimate the allure of a cowgirl in old jeans, a well-worn shirt worn well, and mussed hair! Put her astride a stallion and oh my!
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Thanks so much my friend for a wonderful and much appreciated review! ~Sharon
there may be a misconcepion of farm women...you have so poetically cleared that up.
Women can toil with the best of men...but then be very sexy on the other hand.
feminine yet strong.
I really like this,
j.
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2 Years Ago
Awww! Thanks so much my friend for a wonderful review. I appreciate you. ~Sharon
My name is Sharon, I am a retired piano teacher, I love the mountains where I hike and snowshoe, have had several poems published and love to write. I also love to read almost anything I can get my ha.. more..