WARNING SIGNS

WARNING SIGNS

A flash within a troubled mind

Before the day began,

Gave credence to another time

Upon the mountain sand.

With winds that splayed their icy cries

On heights that bore their shame,

Relentless brooding prayers to God

Now bore the guilt and blame.

The wooing calls on lofty plains

Heard round about the air,

Seemed likened to an angels voice

On silken wings of prayer.

But then an angry vision cast

Upon the waters fierce,

Gave warning signs about the days

That soon each soul would pierce.

Give heed good men to what you hear

And what the eyes may see.

For soon the message sent to all

Will cause each soul to flee!

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Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

There may been warning signs in the past, that wasn't from an angel's wings, and this time is not either. the winds and fierce water brood something else...perhaps the universe is unstable, and whoever is up there is warning us of what is to become.....a very cruel world, which if gets out of hand could affect our souls; then they would flee to safety.
Nice write Sharon, I think I get what you're saying.
Best, B

[Miss Sharon]

Yes my friend. I too think you "get" what I am saying in this write. Thanks so much for your kind review. ~Sharon

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Sharon
Best, B

[AYVID N]

This poem is so beautifully rhymes and metered and with such an awesome thought in it. I loved absolutely!

[Miss Sharon]

Awww! Thank you so much for your kindness. ~Sharon

[William Michael Reeves]

A ballade in iambic meter. I like it! And I, a good man, hope the bad man does hear your message loud and clear!

[Miss Sharon]

Well thank you kind sir...and good man! I appreciate you. ~Sharon

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sharon.. we live in uncertain times when Church Bells Ring sadly for the beautiful people… the Babies and Children and Elderly and all in between. But still the Flowers appear and Clouds form in the Sky of 💕 loved ones so dear. Why does the Spirit of Beauty struggle so. tenderly, Pat

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks so much Pat for your beautiful remarks on this write. I appreciate you! ~Sharon

[Chris Shaw]

A reminder that we live in an unstable world. From climate change to conflict, there is plenty of it. For peace lovers and lovers of our planet the outlook is bleak. Wonderfully penned dear Sharon

Chriis

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks so much Chris for your kind review! I appreciate you. ~Sharon