double Ethre form

A short poem of love.

(A double Ethre)

I

can see

in your eyes

all of your love

and your tenderness

the beauty of the soul

opens the summer windows

to children playing in the rain

refreshed by cooling springtime showers

then after the showers have ceased to fall

and flowers begin to bloom once again

the sun dresses up in lemon drops

to sweeten every rosebud's scent

and it all began within

the beauty of the soul

in opened windows

within your eyes

where I have

seen your

love

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Sharon... a Music Teacher surely sees a pattern in a Verse with Music. A lovely Composition with sentiments that play together... "the beauty of the Soul opens Summer Windows... Blue Birds gather twigs for nesting... Twilight's Lullaby. tenderly, Pat

[Miss Sharon]

Awww sweetie! Thanks so much for your beautiful review. You are appreciated. ~Sharon

[Lisasview]

You are welcome
Losa

[Lisasview]

Oh no Lisa
On my IPhone

[KAREN]

Sharon, this is so beautiful! I love the flow, I love the format and I loved the poem!

[Ken Simm.]

This, to me is such a refreshing write. Hopeful and generous. Which is what we all need perhaps at the moment.

[Lisasview]

Sweet poem..Enjoyed reading this before going to my Steinway to practice Chopin for an hour...
Your poems have a musical nature to them..
Lisa, in cold and getting light now, Spain

[Miss Sharon]

To practice for an hour??? You put this retired piano teacher to shame. Thanks for your kind words in review. ~Sharon