IF YOU LISTEN

Poem of hope for a world in pain.

IF YOU LISTEN

If you listen, you will hear

Something in the wind...so clear

Gently stills the heart in pain

Off'ring hope amid disdain

Feel the brush of angel wings

Soft the voice that sweetly sings

Giving hope to those who call

Lifting those who 'oft would fall

Brush the tears from out the eye

Cease the anguish of the cry

Nothing is too hard for One

Who has sent His only Son

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Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Sharon, i love the content of this write, the hope jumps off the page. The faith sings. Such gentle words paint the strongest canvas in the mind. The flow and the rhyme are exceptional. Another wonderful piece, Sharon. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs always....Mike.

[Miss Sharon]

Ah Mike, you always brighten my day! Thank you for your kind words. ~Sharon

[shadrach hah]

Hi Sharon, you are always welcome. I am glad I can lighten your day. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs always....Mike.

[Ana B.]

Love the tone of this, like a much needed balm on the soul. Just what I needed to read today. Absolutely lovely, dear writer :)

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks ever so much for your kind and generous review! ~Sharon

[Fran Marie]

a lovely write of hope
expressed so well
loving the rhyme within
your lines here..

nice work

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks so much Fran! I appreciate you. ~Sharon

[K writes]

now there you go, SO VERY lovely and well written.
God sent his only son into this world.
Love this so much

[Miss Sharon]

Ahhhhhhhhhh! Thanks so much for your kind review. I appreciate you. ~Sharon

[K writes]

not a problem

[Betty Hermelee]

there is much hope in the piece; your imagery is soft and but with much advice; if you listen very carefully your pain will be b; it just all washed away by the one from above, his Son....I love the structure and rhyme, it all melds together so well.
Lovely.
Best
B.

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks so much Betty for a lovely review! ~Sharon

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome Sharon!😊

[Carola]

wow, an amazing writing!
cheerio carola

[Miss Sharon]

You are much too kind...thank you! ~Sharon

[Silmara McGarry]

First, a poem of true hope in such tormented times. Your poem is soft like a prayer sang by angels to give hope to the souls. A soul prayer is always a heart prayer. Such heart warming words and very well written! And the last part, ohhhh I had tears in my eyes...Thank you so much for a truly beautiful poem dear Sharon:-))) God Bless you

[Miss Sharon]

Awwwwwwwww! Thank you for your kind words in review. ~Sharon

[Silmara McGarry]

You are most welcome dear!!! :-)))

[KeithMansfield]

Love it. It's a very touching, well written poem.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you kind sir for your nice review! ~Sharon

[wordman]

thoughts of the heart only the soul can bring

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you my friend. Your words mean a lot to me! ~Sharon

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Chris Shaw]

How soothing are these tender words Sharon. A beautiful prayer. Wonderfully uplifting. Thank you so much for sharing.

Chris

[Miss Sharon]

You are so kind. Thank you my friend. ~Sharon