He was ridin' against the wind that day.
The horses were tired and needed some hay.
His saddle seemed hard and lumpy at best...
The place where he sat sure needed a rest!
The sun was a blazin' for all it was worth,
And one mama cow plopped down and gave birth.
The dust was so thick it left grit on your teeth,
But all you could think of was fat juicy beef!
That night for dinner 'ole Charlie cooked steak.
Then it was worth all the dust we had ate!
The life of a cowboy is not one for sissies
Or sweet little gals that the fellers called missies!
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As is always the case, your sense of rhythm and rhyme is superb, Sharon. I especially liked, "The place where he sat sure needed a rest!" You really put a smile on my face with this one. I had visions of the Marlboro Man riding into the sunset to cook his steak for dinner. Wonderful. Lydi**
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Awww! Thanks so much my friend for the kind review. I love your new photo pretty lady. ~Sharon
Makes me more grateful that steaks and burgers don't need to be hunted by us and that there is always a story of how it got to our plate thst we rarely think of.
I shall think of them all and smile, next time I'm picking out a steak and burgers from the supermarket and be super grateful I didn't have to catch it myself, otherwise I'd most likely be vegan 😀
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LOL I'm with you about becoming vegan if I had to "catch it myself!" Thanks for the nice review. ~Sh.. read moreLOL I'm with you about becoming vegan if I had to "catch it myself!" Thanks for the nice review. ~Sharon
Wow awesome poem in great rhyming and I enjoyed the country scenes and love the mention of horses. I hope they didn't eat the cow that just gave birth aw. Kudos for a superb one.
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Thanks so much for a very nice review of this one! ~Sharon
Such is the life of a cowboy. Can’t say I ever stayed on the range night after. Night. But I think I know the
Life well enough. As always the attention to detail makes it look effortless you are really good at this
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Awwwwww! Thanks so much Tate. I really appreciate reviews from writers with your kind of talent. ~Sh.. read moreAwwwwww! Thanks so much Tate. I really appreciate reviews from writers with your kind of talent. ~Sharon
Nothing like a real cowboy...this reminds me of when I was about 12 and in Boy Scouts. We did a paper drive to make enough money to spend a week at a dude ranch...
There were two cowboys who basically ran the show...one was a summer and weekend cowboy, the other was real...
there was quite a difference between the two...
one had that dust...the other? well....
j.
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Thanks so much Jacob for your kind review...muchly appreciated my friend. ~Sharon
As is always the case, your sense of rhythm and rhyme is superb, Sharon. I especially liked, "The place where he sat sure needed a rest!" You really put a smile on my face with this one. I had visions of the Marlboro Man riding into the sunset to cook his steak for dinner. Wonderful. Lydi**
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Awww! Thanks so much my friend for the kind review. I love your new photo pretty lady. ~Sharon
My name is Sharon, I am a retired piano teacher, I love the mountains where I hike and snowshoe, have had several poems published and love to write. I also love to read almost anything I can get my ha.. more..