DANCING IN THE RAIN

A love poem dedicated to my husband of 55 years...JIM!

 

DANCING IN THE RAIN Your love is like a rose bouquet... So fragrant in the bloom. Your smile is like Chantilly lace, That floats across the room. Your presence gives me strength to stand When life bequeaths me pain. You hold my hand and sing me songs... While dancing in the rain. Your faith in 'us' gives me the will And courage to go on... When life is hard and I'm remiss While thinking I'm its pawn. You hold me up when I am weak... Believing all things true. You always see the best in me And I'm in love with you! oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo HAPPY 55TH. ANNIVERSARY JIM!

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A wonderful tribute to your marriage and your husband Jim here Sharon. He certainly comes across as your rock when the going gets tough and your love and appreciation for him shine through. Classical style and so well penned. A treat to read.

Chris

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you ever so much for your wonderful comments and congratulations. I appreciate you! ~Sharon

[Patricia Wedel]

A belated Hapoy Anniversary”. Quiet moments spent at Ebbtide where Life is easy and the breeze is pleasant... Rockin with the Waves of Blessings... I share these sentimental wishes for more dreams come true. gently, Pat

[Miss Sharon]

What a sweet response to this write Pat! Thanks ever so much. ~Sharon

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Such a wonderful, loving expression of devotion and appreciation. Congratulations on your lives together. It makes me smile to think that there are still some lasting love affairs alive in the world today. My mom and dad were that way...so loyal and fiercely protective of our family. This is beautiful.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for a beautiful review of this write! My husband and I met in church which may have something as to why our marriage has lasted....better than a bar eh? Thanks for your review! ~Sharon

[zainul]

The opportunity of dancing in the rain is the matter of dream of most people irrespective of gender.But,all are not so much blessed.You are very fortunate to have a divine conjugal life through 55 years.I hope such lovely, romantic and divine relationship goes on up to lucky number 555 or beyond.
Thank you Sharon for sharing.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you ever so much for your lovely review of this write! Muchly appreciated. ~Sharon

[wordman]

you are the wings beneath my feet

[Miss Sharon]

Awwwwwww! Thank you Ron. Always a pleasure to hear from you my friend. ~Sharon

[wordman]

my pleasure miss sharon

[Gee]

Beautiful.
What a wonderful gift for your partner.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much for your nice review of this write my friend! ~Sharon

[barleygirl]

I can't relate to such a partnership, having witnessed so many bad ones, but your poem depicts a lifelong experience that may help one believe in the power of union (which I only barely believe in!) Your tribute to your hubby, as well as to your marriage is gracefully stated, (altho not my cup of tea, frankly), but you paint a word tapestry of what people dream of, look for, & write about, more than any other thing in life! Here's hoping you & your loved ones are doing well & healthy (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for your kind remarks on this write and it is my prayer that one day you too will find such a love as I have been blessed to share with my husband. Don't give up hope! ~Sharon

[barleygirl]

I just noticed your little blurb about 55 years . . . only a couple weeks ago, a dear friend of mine on this website -- you may know Norman 223 -- he & his wife also celebrated 55 years. When he told me, I was stunned at the idea, since I've not done very many things in life for more than a decade until I get my next wild hair. Congrats, again, for accomplishing what few do . . . I believe in relationship, even if I'm no good at it! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Rania M]

Dancing in the rain is to me, the ultimate expression of the spiritual joy, specifically the one we find in another’s company. I love the delicacy of the first verse. You weaved a beautiful love story. I wish yous a long long and happy journey of love!

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you ever so much Rania for your beautiful review of this write! ~Sharon

[emmajoy]

Meter perfect, a truly sincere and wonderful poem, Sharon!

No wonder he loves you.. those words are such a special gift, Sharon.

Wishing both you and Jim a very sincere though late CONGRATULATIONS!

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much my friend for your beautiful comments on this write and for your congratulations for our anniversary. ~Sharon

[emmajoy]

More than a pleasure!