SIT ME OUT AMONG THE STARS

Witness of creation's power...

SIT ME OUT AMONG THE STARS


Sit me out among the stars
Let the show begin
Maker of all heaven and earth
Where the soul has been

Looking up from whence life sprang
Thereunto unfold
Every creature formed to be
From the Master's mold

None to witness or to see
What or how or when
Fill me now with child-like faith
As the stars ascend

Comrade of all life's design
'Ere the earth was formed
Miracle and master plan
From His hand adorned
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Reviews

[Tom]

Some are of the opinion it all began from nothing but how so ? Such enormity and splendour are on a magnitude that mere humans can never hope to fully comprehend, then again, I believe that's the whole point of a much, much higher knowledge than ours !

A beautifully crafted, cosmic, stellar and interstellar poem Miss Sharon!

[Miss Sharon]

Awwww! Thank you so much Tom. You just made my day. ~Sharon

[GypsyMoonCat]

Beautifully worded and structured, I drank this in as I read. This painted a picture, not to mention the complement of the lovely pic you chose to go with it!

[Miss Sharon]

Such a sweet and muchly appreciated review! Thank you ever so much. ~Sharon

[wordman]

the greatest painter in the universe,he creates most beautiful displays
in living color..you did a great job on this beautiful write and imagery

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much Ron for your very kind review. And yes...HE is the greatest painter and creator of all things! Have a Happy Thanksgiving my friend. ~Sharon

[Shabeeh Haider]

Beautiful starting lines, and it goes on to form a wonderful poem that asks for answers from none other than the creator of it all.
There is a divine touch to this poem and a very child like innocence in your words.
Beautifully written.

[Miss Sharon]

You honor and humble me with your beautiful review! Thank you so much. ~Sharon

[Shabeeh Haider]

Most welcome , :)

[emmajoy]

'Sit me out among the stars ~~ Let the show begin.. .. ' Yes, yes, yes please. What truly deep and sincere feelings come from your words from the start..

There really is something divine about a starry night sky that fills the heart, the spirit and vision with absolute emotion. Even the sight of clouds passing across the stars, veiling them for a moment or few gives another dimension to that panorama... and for goodness, WE are part of it. What an absolute privilege that is, tis more than precious, tis more than...

Whether astro-wotsit or theological, scientific or spiritual, to sit back and absorb that night sky just moves a person into another world.. Tis an opening of a door into something... more than.. .. ..

What a wonderful collection of heart.felt words, Miss Sharon.. am smiling, feeling more than ..

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you ever so much my sweetie for such a wonderful review of this write. I really appreciate you! ~Sharon