THE LAST TIME...(10 Word Challenge)

                  THE LAST TIME

Sunshine fractured my compass as a pungent
Aroma from the wharf caught me off guard.
This day had a knack for knowing just when
To push my buttons. Eager to get off the scree
Strewn trail which caused the use of an entire
Package of moleskin, I unfurled the crinkled
Map for what I hoped would be the last time!
                          ~~   

Reviews

[tanmay7551]

Very well written! I liked the opening line -

Sunshine fractured my compass as a pungent

[Miss Sharon]

You are so kind my friend...thank you! ~Sharon

[Lydia Shutter]

I have no idea what the ten words were, but you wrote such a smooth poem, nothing is forced. The imagery is so wonderful. You brought me to the trail and I could see the crinkly map clearly. Wonderful work. Lydi**

[Miss Sharon]

Awwwwwww You are such a sweetie! Thanks so much Lydi.

[Nirupama.H]

Strong imagery. Really enjoyed reading this piece.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you ever so much for a beautiful and complimentary review of this piece! ~Sharon

[Nirupama.H]

You're welcome.