A MIND TO FILL

A MIND TO FILL

There's too much information in
This cluttered mind of mimeing. 
Too many words and numbers too...
With stilted filtered rhyming.

Some things are wont to falling out
When I but least expect it.
The train of thought I thought I had
Just simply...cannot fake it!

My mem'ry flits about with ease
And I cannot remember,
If I am going in or out
Or if...this is December!

What can be done with such a mind
Whose oats need youthful sowing?
I guess I'll let it have its way
Before I needs be going!
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Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

very wistful feeling when i read this one ...emptying is really all about re-filling ...over and over ;) i sure can relate to forgetting ..at my age it can be a little worrisome ..but i am told that the amount i have is normal :) ... the moment is full of living enough eh!?
E.

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ..............

[Miss Sharon]

What a beautiful philosophical review! And yes my friend...the present moment is time enough. It is after all....all we have! ~Sharon

[emmajoy]

Love it, tis fun and probably true but if it is, why worry, smiles a dozen going strong above!
And isn't that the way to deal with this wonderful couplet, ' .. The train of thought I thought I had - - Just simply ...cannot fake it!'
Seems you're Peter Pan in a tutuflying here, there and everywhere, fancy free and happy!

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks so much my sweetie! ~Sharon

[Valentine]

Isn't growing older so much fun!!!!!!!! Valentine

[Miss Sharon]

Oh yes indeed...growing older is a real trip! But hey there's one good thing...at least I can hide my own Easter eggs. (lol) Thanks for playing along my friend. ~Sharon

[Shabeeh Haider]

You are so correct, Sharon. Our minds are cluttered with information and sometimes things get so muddled up.
A Very nicely rhymed poem and one that leaves a smile on the face after reading it.

[Miss Sharon]

I always enjoy and appreciate your reviews very much my friend. Thank you! ~Sharon