DANCES WITH MOON

A fantasy of joy...

DANCES WITH MOON

With simple stride they take their stance
To wield position for the dance
In myst'ry there within the room
Begins the longing for the moon

An open window from above
Grants witness to the view of love
Aurora borealis' plume
Fills up the space for bride and groom

An arabesque which mimics play
Brings offers for a magic stay
Performing opulence of joy
And enters hearts of girl and boy

Entwined within their love and dreams
The night is never what it seems
To dance with moon or star or sun...
One must forever cease to run
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Reviews

[Epicness]

Really lovely poem, as I read it, I could see the story in my mind :)

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for your kind review Epicness! ~SP

[emmajoy]

Ahhhh - the moon, and its precious magic! You've created - in very fine meter, a beautiful and elegant poem. The second stanza especially, is as near an undecipherable space of .. everything words mean.

[Miss Sharon]

Well this review just made my day my dear! Thank you so much. ~SP

[emmajoy]

My pleasure..

[Great Aunt Astri]

I think you have structured this poem really well. It is a 'finished ' poem and very beautiful. Thanks for writing it.

[Miss Sharon]

Such a lovely and complimentary review! Thank you so much. ~Sharon

[B. Boileau]

ummm I wonder if this what Van Morris had in mind... You discribe a marvelous night for one.
I really liked this a lot !

bill

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much Bill for your beautiful review of this write! ~Sharon

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah, a happy poem---dancing under the moon----not a care in the world. thank you for this...


j.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you ever so muchly my dear friend for a lovely review of this write...and yes, I too felt it to be a happy write as it came to view on the page. Isn't writing a wonderfully creative medium to vent all of ones emotions....from good to bad to not so good and beyond! ~Sharon

[mattavelli]

This is beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.

[Miss Sharon]

You are most welcome! Thank you for your kind words. ~Sharon