A TENDER WEAPON

I look forward to your interpretation of this write! (I'll never tell.)

A TENDER WEAPON

Beneath the smile which often sits
Upon the lover's waiting lips
There lies a truth which can't be found
Within the chambers' secret sound

Beholden there with much aplomb
To hold the dream as it unfolds
There lives a message from the grave
Of one whose name is lost...to save

This tender weapon of the heart
Now bids the lovers never part
Where lies the truth of greater worth...
This love was never meant for earth
~~

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

I have 2 interpretations. The first (the one with most credence), You discribed love in a much larger sense. A level not yet discovered, the euphoric feeling once felt would make mankind change and the world an entirely different place.
or
A perfect discription of the story behind GHOST with Demi Moore and Patrick Swayze
I can't decide
Thank you very much Sharon for making us think. You have done a superb job !!
bill

[Miss Sharon]

Bravo my fellow wordsmith! Love your interpretation(s) and thank you for your wonderful review. ~SP

[charlie]

I think of Grace as the truth of greater worth

[Miss Sharon]

And I as well! Thanks Charlie. ~Sharon

[Great Aunt Astri]

Well, I think you mean there is something going on behind the scenes! I have always believed there is more to life. I think the lovers are being guided, somehow!

[Miss Sharon]

A beautiful interpretation my friend! I thank you for your kind review. ~Sharon

[Cryingkate]

Oh My Goodness ! I love challenges and games!
Geez I am still reading it over and over and over.....
I keep tossing it like a salad and coming up with different vegetation :-)
I'm gonna say This is about "The Breath/Holy Spirit"

Thanks for the extra fun Sharon. This was really not so easy yeah know :-)

[Miss Sharon]

What a beautiful review my dear! Thank you ever so much. I love your interpretation of the write and to be fair to others who may comment I will refrain to tell my original intent. Thanks again for your kind words!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

for me, it is a reminder of Romeo and Juliet (or that type of situation) meant to be together, but sometimes not in this life----circumstances can often deter those lovers from getting together in this life, yet the love is so strong and eternal, it cannot be stopped...and these lovers will find each other's heart...they are reserved for one another.

[Miss Sharon]

I love your interpretation of this write Jacob. Thank you for the time you spent to analyze and comment. I appreciate you! I will not say openly to anyone what my own intent was in order to be fair to all. ~Sharon