COMING HOME

Coming home to mother nature....

COMING HOME


My thoughts are enveloped by
 scent of pine and distant calls of the loon where
 white-laced mountains touch the face of God
and eagle wings slice frigid mountain air.

Leafing through pages of time and recall I am
chilled to the bone yet warmed by nature's glow.
And though I've hiked these trails in every season
known to man, and felt the presence of Deity so near,

Each time seems like the first and nature welcomes
me as her new friend by introducing me
to never before seen treasures. And hearing her
 selective summons....I feel that I am coming home!
***

Reviews

[It's Me, The Miracle]

The lovely aroma of nature seemed to touch me as I was going through your lines....I loved the adjective phrases you used in the work like white-laced and eagle wings slice frigid.
"Each time seems like the first, as nature welcomes
me as her new friend by introducing me
to never before seen treasures and hearing
her selective summons I feel that I am coming home!" I am fascinated by the imagination presented by these lines....Thank you for sharing this poem.

[Miss Sharon]

Wow! Thank you ever so much for such a beautiful and complimentary review. Much appreciated. ~Sharon

[It's Me, The Miracle]

:).............

[Owl Arctic]

great pic, and I love the poem it truly reminds me of home.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you ever so much for your beautiful review of this write! Where is home for you? ~Sharon

[Owl Arctic]

Hanna Utah

[Miss Sharon]

I've only briefly driven through your beautiful state. Thanks again for a lovely review! ~Sharon

[R Smith]

I can feel the beauty you expressed here Sharon, white laced mountains and eagle wings, the imagery is beautiful and the sense of home is a delight to read and feel, lovely work my friend :)

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much for a lovely review my dear friend! You are appreciated. ~Sharon

[Desert Knave]

So beautiful and personal. Each time I hear about the first decent snowfall of the year I think about you out there walking in it. Hope you are getting the winter you are wanting. ~Jim

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much Jim for your very nice review of this write! And thanks for thinking about me...your old computer sis. ~Shaon

[rubie]

What I enjoy most about your poetry is how well you convey sensual imagery to the readers, so that the reader can smell the mountain air, see the sun glinting off the mountains and feel the brisk mountain air against the skin. Beautifully done!

[rubie]

You are most welcome, Sharon. By the way, that was supposed to be "sensory" imagery, not "sensual". But, either could apply....

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you ever so much Rubie for a wonderful review! You are appreciated my sweetie. ~Sharon

[wordman]

as i climb these majestic peaks ,and feel the breeze,watching eagles fly,
i reach out and touch the face of god,my home my heart lies here..
a beautiful write sharon and the photo was spectacular

[Miss Sharon]

You are always so kind to me Ron! Thank you so much. ~Sharon

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Lydia Shutter]

I have told you before....you are one with Mother Nature, Sharon. The emotions are delicate and yet powerful. The imagery is stunning. Absolutely wonderful write. Lydi**

[Miss Sharon]

You are such a sweetie my dear friend! Thank you for such beautiful words to me today....you always make me feel good. ~Sharon

[Valentine]

Beautiful sentiments and picture. After losing my husband I moved back to Mich. in early Nov. Just after peak color season. It was beautiful. I had forgotten the maple trees beauty living in Ark. Coming home. Valentine

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you my friend for a beautiful review. I really appreciate you! ~Sharon

[Valentine]

Been very ill for a couple of weeks, finally shaking it. Hope to catch up soon. Kathie

[Epicness]

Lovely poem - the descriptions you've used such as "eagle wings slice frigid mountain air" are very vivid and give the reader a real sense of what you are describing :)

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much for your beautiful review! ~Sharon

[Zahra]

Each time seems like the first, as nature welcomes
me as her new friend by introducing me

Lovely words. This photo is just beautiful, and the words flow so wonderfully allowing us to experience that serenity.

[Miss Sharon]

What a lovely review Zahra....thank you! ~Sharon