gotta love those tip-toeing cats...mine is too clumsy to tiptoe...she just gets under foot...sort of like that muse, when thoughts swell and get awkward to carry and/or write down.
meanwhile, we sit in the mist begging clarity, not only of thought, but of all that is happening around us in this world...
so we write it the best we can.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thanks for a wonderful review my fellow wordsmith...you made my day! ~SP
This is what I call a "poetic gem". I enjoyed the rhythm and flow, and that gentle appearance of internal rhyme. Glad i came across this - thanks for sharing!
this is wonderful Sharon, it feels foggy too, an atmosphere seems to flow with the words and a mind beguiled is the reader (me) by your writing, a poem supreme :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thanks Richard for a wonderful review. I appreciate you! ~SP
9 Years Ago
you'll always be welcome Sharon, such superb writing is a treat to read :)
gotta love those tip-toeing cats...mine is too clumsy to tiptoe...she just gets under foot...sort of like that muse, when thoughts swell and get awkward to carry and/or write down.
meanwhile, we sit in the mist begging clarity, not only of thought, but of all that is happening around us in this world...
so we write it the best we can.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks for a wonderful review my fellow wordsmith...you made my day! ~SP
My name is Sharon, I am a retired piano teacher, I love the mountains where I hike and snowshoe, have had several poems published and love to write. I also love to read almost anything I can get my ha.. more..