FIRM EVIDENCE

Do you believe in magic?

She weaved her magic spell in kind,
Within the bonsai of his mind.
Replete with verve and skill unto,
The kindred hour of Enyatue.

Before the gong of midnight plea,
She planted love beneath the tree.
And every passerby that came,
Remained to be...no more in pain.

Her speech, though cloaked in mist of rhyme,
Became a maxim to confine.
In silent hint of recompense....
There need not be firm evidence.
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Reviews

[~]

Gorgeous write. Love the imagery the words entice the reader with.
lovely picture!

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much for a lovely review of this piece. You are appreciated! ~Sharon

[Great Aunt Astri]

I enjoyed this poem. I shall have to look up Enyatue ... but even not knowing it adds magic and mystery to this well written poem.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much for your lovely review of this piece! Don't look too hard to find Enyatue...it is poetic license being taken advantage of! (In other words...I made it up.)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Good for you! I may well use the word in one of my poems!

[Miss Sharon]

You go girl!! ~S

[Valentine]

Beautiful picture and awesome write. Valentine

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for a beautiful review Kathie! You are appreciated my dear. ~Sharon

[Sami Khalil]

This is really a firm evidence of romance, of magic spells and of great growth of Bonsai trees to appreciate. Glad you shared with us...:).............

[Miss Sharon]

Ahhhhhhhhhh! What a lovely review Sami. Thank you so much my friend. ~Sharon

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ....:).....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

great rhythm and rhyme scheme....come and see the magic tree.....filled with love blooms and serendipity...
his mind has landed, and she is his safe runway....

love this one.

[Miss Sharon]

Well now this is a review to make me smile for a week...or month...or year! Thanks so much Jacob my friend. ~Sharon