DEATH'S DOOR IS DRAWN

DEATH'S DOOR IS DRAWN
 

Our time was too short... Every couple I see, Reminds me of you And the mem'ries of "we". I hear them speak love Into each others ear, And how my heart longs for Your arms to be near. When angels shall call me To join you at rest, I'll hold you and kiss you And know I've been blessed. I'll love you forever, Though death's door is drawn. And even though breaking.... My heart will go on. ~~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the realistic feel and thoughts in the poetry.
"I'll love you forever,
Though death's door is drawn.
And even though breaking....
My heart will go on."
With death, kind love will still live and stand her ground. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much for your wonderful words on this write! ~Sharon

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Samuel Dickens]

I don't "get into" everyone's poetry, but this is outstanding. So easily embraced, I felt the sad longing and applied it to my own life.

[Miss Sharon]

I thank you so much Samuel for the lovely and complimentary review! ~Sharon

[stansg]

wow! very sincere and touching words, loved it.

When angels shall call me
To join you at rest,
I'll hold you and kiss you
And know I've been blessed.

I'll love you forever,
Though death's door is drawn.
And even though breaking....
My heart will go on.

Amazing work.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much for your very nice remarks on this write! ~Sharon

[nazia]

Forgetting a loved one is a task next to impossible.. true love always has a special place which it never vacates... eloquent work.. :)

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much for your compassionate response and kind words! ~Sharon

[Samhitha Mopati]

Words of love and affection are amazing to hear, always!
Your poem seems to be a reflection of a true occurrence!
A delicate poem with boundless feelings crafted into it.
Fantastic work, Miss Sharon!

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much for your beautiful comments! ~Sharon

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow yes, the heart will go on, no matter if the distance is eternity---

we never forget...

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you ever so much my friend for your kind words! ~Sharon

[Valentine]

This seems to have been written for me. Others who lost their mates that I know moved on to another quickly, me I hang on like the words in this write. Sad huh.. Valentine

[Miss Sharon]

Grieving is such a personal thing and there is no right or wrong way to do the work that needs to be done. Please don't allow anyone to try and tell you what to feel or when to move on. Thank you for reading my "stuff" and I am happy to have a new friend! ~Sharon

[Jamestown]

Fantastic heart felt piece, well written and so beautiful!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much kind sir! I appreciate you. ~Sharon