IT WANTS ME BACK

 

Sleeping fitfully, catnaps shuffle dreams To keep me asleep. It's pointless. I wake to white sounds of snowfall As I try to remember what day it is. All night my body ran on without me... Now it wants me back. ***

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I do like this poem. Had the feel of dream and struggle to find the proper place again. I like the ending. Left the reader with question. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Made me think this morning.
Coyote

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks John for very nice words of comment and approval! That means a lot to me. ~Sharon

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Demii]

Aweh this almost seems sad, like depression, takes a big toll on your life as well. I like how precise and smooth it is.

[Miss Sharon]

I see that you are very perceptive my dear! Yes, this was written during one of my depressive cycles. Thank you for reading and commenting! ~Sharon

[Demii]

you're very welcome :)