Wandering these hills at dusk
Is like laying the sun to rest as the
Final moments of an ordinary day
Slip quietly just beyond reach.
Field mice scurry to find an unsuspecting
Meal of simplicity unaware of the
Stalking red fox doing the same.
Robins tug the last slim worminess from moist
Soil laid wet by winter's soggy remains in a time
Relieved of itinerary...nothing to cross off a list.
Leaning gently into sequence, I am observant and
Receptive to small vestiges of nature's skillful play.
Like a firefly lifting light from the ground
To see night fall in its own shadow, silence
Clings to me...soft as familiar gloves, while
Evening relieves the day of its being.
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very well written with beautiful theme...superlike
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed this piece. It is a favorite of mine because of the "mood" .. read moreThank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed this piece. It is a favorite of mine because of the "mood" I was in at the time. Introspective yet looking to the future with hope. ~Sharon
love that last line....and all the imagery gets me there...reminds me of where i live...many foxes live out here...and they are such beautiful animals...nothing like nature to soothe the heart and soul.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you so much Jacob! I actually wrote the last line first and it became the "bones" around which.. read moreThank you so much Jacob! I actually wrote the last line first and it became the "bones" around which I built the rest of the poem. ~Sharon
My name is Sharon, I am a retired piano teacher, I love the mountains where I hike and snowshoe, have had several poems published and love to write. I also love to read almost anything I can get my ha.. more..