YOUR LIFE I'LL REARRANGE

A prophetic poem and conversation between the two main characters.

Why do you even try to win
The battle looming 'round?
You know your time is very short
And soon the trumpet sounds!

You've had your hay day far too long.
My patience will not last!
And though the world is fast asleep,
My time approaches fast.

I have an army you can't see,
Prepared and armored well.
The damage they will do to you...
Well, time will only tell!

I've only just to say the word
And everything will change.
You think you've won but I know best...
Your life I'll rearrange!
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Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

will peace ever really come...the dark side seems to be winning at this point...
or at least they seem to be making life pretty uncomfortable..

peace and love can only come from within...that is the real battle.

and this is an excellent poem.

[Miss Sharon]

You do indeed make poignant and plausible points Jacob. (Intentional alliteration!) And thank you ever so much for also mentioning you think it is an excellent poem. That my friend just made my day! ~Sharon

[Valentine]

Satan and God. Very interesting and having just arrived home from God's House, I know who has all ready won. Neat idea for a write. Valentine

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for your knowledgeable and positive feedback Kathie! Yes...we already know who has won! ~Sharon