A random poem

A random poem I thought I'd try, inspired by the escalating crisis in Syria

Bombs

Bombs fall, bombs drop

I watch what I cannot stop

devastation hurts my mind

people can be so unkind

Lies upon lies

worth only self gain

red bloodied dyes

causing nothing but pain

I picture a world

peaceful and blue

how would it be 

without me and you

just land and sea

nothing to war

nothing but tree

bombs fall, bombs drop 

When will we stop

 

Author's Note

Don't really write poetry but thought I'd make a quick one up

Reviews

[Chaos_Collector]

Reminds me of all the war going on and striving for peace. It serves as a reminder for the devastation out and out. Excellent work!

[Sami Khalil]

"I picture a world

peaceful and blue

how would it be

without me and you

just land and sea

nothing to war"
A message of hope and peace in this mad world of ours. Thank you for sharing...:)

[Shep]

I liked the poem, i don't write a lot of poetry anymore, yet when i do i tend to uses in my novels either to introduce my book or use as spell for my many wizards or just for fun you'll notice it when you read me. I even have a whole book of it.

[Laminators Dubai]

its a awesome quick one up...
thanks fot sharing the words...^^

[Distantview123]

A thought-provoking poem. Without mankind there would be no war. Animals (those that are carnivores) only kill to eat. We kill for all kinds of pathetic reasons. Thanks for sharing. ~ Robert.