HE GAVE ALL

short and sweet

He gave us beauty, He gave us Grace,

He holds us in His loving embrace.

 

He gave His Son to forgive our sins,

What more can He give for you to come to Him?

 

Accept the gifts he has given you,

Share each one in all you do.

 

Give to others as you receive,

And most of all, always believe.

 

Author's Note

I haven't written in ages. Have very little time to but I do enjoy it so very much. You may not hear much from me, yet again, life is unpredictable. God Bless

Reviews

[The Archangel Gabriel]

That is indeed short and sweet. Well written.

-Gabe

[Stephen Ownby]

The rhyme here is good, but the actual statements are not very origninal. Just because you are writing about Jesus, doesn't mean that you cannot say things in an original way. Try using metaphor and imagery to say the same things.

[darkgurl]

So very true and very well written.

[Iretex2012]

nice write

[Becca]

Short, Sweet and Beautiful.
I agree with Barry on enhancing the visuals but the message is lovely just the same.

[Barry S. Maltese]

Nice flow. Concise and to the point. You might wish to start new lines for each sentence to enhance visual effect, but the rhyme scheme is perfect, and the message awesome. Nice work