ColorMeDeadly.

I got the Title idea from my friend & the poem idea from editing the photo I put as the poem picture .. It kind of sucks but whatever ..

Grab a crayon & color my world .
Color iht darkk; or make it colorful .

Iht's up to you- I have no say .
Go ahead; it's so easy .
Just grab a crayon; they're all over the place ..
Color my world; make my day .

You've colored my world; yay!
..Oh but you've ruined my world..
You've done more thenn color iht..
You ripped upp my drawing .. Yet you were thoughtful enoughh to tapee iht backk togetherr .. Thanks .. I guess ..

You erased my rainbow& put  rainclouds ..
My trees once full of leaves- now dead & bare .
The sun is gone & the moon is upp ..
Skyy darkken; where's the light ?

The smile on the girls face gonee;
replaced w. a frownn ..
What did you do & why ?
Where's her smile; did you take it ?

Whyy is her world darken; iWanted you to color it- but not change it completely ..

Why did you erase what brought her joy ?
Change her world; into something she never imaged ..
Take her smile & hide it somewhere far away .
& Ripped apart her world; at least you put it back together again ..



You've Colored Her Deadly .

Author's Note

Alright just to let the readers know this poem is basically about a girl who gave her heart to a boy, in this case asked him to ' color her world ' as in she trusted him. Instead he ripped her ' picture ' [ heart ] a part, and changed her ' world ' from a rainbow to different shades of gray.

Reviews

[I Are Ishmael.]

I love how this came from my signature.
You really took nothing and turned it into something.
I admire that.
The shorthand of it isn't the most desirable way to write a poem, but it evokes emotion, and besides,I 'm used to your typing now lol.
STOP SAYING ALL YOUR WRITING SUCKS, before I sick my small puppy of doom atchu.
just saying.

[Ruth]

Wow!
Unique way of dramatically displaying darkness love!
This is amazing!
xx

[FocusedAmnesia]

Love the concept and the title.

[loowzerX]

this is awesome

[sammyj]

I love this piece, its really got that thing that makes your mind wander and get lost in the world you created

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Nice ascent though...lol...sounds like a troubled cute child at times...

as for the poem, it was deep actually, many things could be related too, yes..many things as sometimes readers do intended to search something behind words...
Keep up...:P