All limerence ends in agony

All limerence ends in agony

But why would we part ways peacefully?

When the fire ignites, does it burn carefully?

No - It rages in a rambunctious symphony.

And I swear darling, you're good for me,

Two clashing notes make a harmony,

A cruel joke landed right is called irony,

And a love that flows easy is a fantasy.

A hornet's hive, buzzing in symmetry,

A low-pitched hum of fragile energy,

Together we fly, delaying tragedy,

But darling, I tremble for the day we'll see,

That all limerence ends in agony.

Reviews

[Amy R]

I can feel the intense passion in this.... Great write.
The use of the paradox as a passionate yet flawed connection, suggesting that while love can bring joy, it is often accompanied by a sense of impending heartbreak.

The comparison of love to music and a hornet's hive serves to illustrate the chaotic yet beautiful nature of the poet's feelings. I can relate to something like this from my past.

This poem also has a very nice rhyme to it AABB scheme. Thanks for sharing,.
-Amy

[Omikron]

Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poems, Amy.

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[Amy R]

You're welcome Omi. :)